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Seseka
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Seseka

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Location : jog...basketball...work
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Registration date : 2009-02-18

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PostSubject: Enzeru Tsubasa   Enzeru Tsubasa Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 10:35 pm

Name: Enzeru Tsubasa

Manifestation: Enzeru Tsubasa 31045464b002f546c3

Release Phrase: Engulf them, Enzeru Tsubasa

Owner: Seseka

Level: Shikai

Family: Darkness

Appearance:
Sealed: Enzeru Tsubasa MC-3055

Shikai: Enzeru Tsubasa UC1239 Its a little longer, Its a greatsword.

Techniques: 2.
Engulf them, Enzeru Tsubasa (I cut my sword in mid air creating a void that moves toward the enemy. If hit they can have parts ripped off of them because of the intense darkness and void) Uses 6

Destroy all life, Enzeru Tsubasa (I stab my sword into the ground and darkness spreads everywhere, I can also control someons shadow and I use it to choke or kill the enemy.) Uses 4
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Sin
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Humor : Bloodthirsty
Registration date : 2009-02-03

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PostSubject: Re: Enzeru Tsubasa   Enzeru Tsubasa Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 5:55 am

okay first of all post a recharge and it says only that you have a 2nd technique but not a 1st and the manifest doesn't work. Also for the owner can you put in your last name =P
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Dante
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Dante

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Registration date : 2009-01-05

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PostSubject: Re: Enzeru Tsubasa   Enzeru Tsubasa Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 4:56 pm

Engulf them, Enzeru Tsubasa (I cut my sword in mid air creating a void that moves toward the enemy. If hit they can have parts ripped off of them because of the intense darkness and void) Uses 6

Explain the uses. I dont understnd what that means. and clear up the last sentence, i dont understand what you mean by "intense darkess and void"

Destroy all life, Enzeru Tsubasa (I stab my sword into the ground and darkness spreads everywhere, I can also control someons shadow and I use it to choke or kill the enemy.) Uses 4

Again with the uses. Define everywhere, 10 meters? 40 meters? What is it? Shadows cannot choke people, and explain "kill the enemy"

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Seseka
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Seseka

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Age : 26
Location : jog...basketball...work
Humor : male
Registration date : 2009-02-18

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PostSubject: Re: Enzeru Tsubasa   Enzeru Tsubasa Icon_minitimeSat Feb 21, 2009 1:40 pm

The Engluf is basicly sending a black hole at the enemy.


Destroy life is based off of Shikmaru's Strangling thing.
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Vergil
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PostSubject: Re: Enzeru Tsubasa   Enzeru Tsubasa Icon_minitimeSat Feb 21, 2009 1:42 pm

change the first tech, since if you made a black hole then you would be sucked in it too

second tech: how would that work out
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Teketsa Kisuke
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Teketsa Kisuke

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Registration date : 2009-01-25

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PostSubject: Re: Enzeru Tsubasa   Enzeru Tsubasa Icon_minitimeSat Feb 21, 2009 1:43 pm

What he means is. The black hole thing is like a concentrated gravity thingy. The shadow thing is like Shikmaru after naruto. You take the shadows of a person and give them form and being. Causing them to be able to transform into a hand or a leg and attack the enemy.

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Vergil
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Vergil

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PostSubject: Re: Enzeru Tsubasa   Enzeru Tsubasa Icon_minitimeSat Feb 21, 2009 1:45 pm

the first tech he cannot use gravity and darkness

second tech how is a shadow going to do any damage to a person
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