Tech 7 I dont understnd what you mean by "wind comes along and Sin's hands get envelopped unto invisible tornado's made entirely out of the wind and his Reaitsu".

Tech 8 To confuseing. You say it makes copies but "they seem so real that the brain of the opponent would think they are real making the spears able to cause damage if hit". Im not following you on this one.

i eddited it is it good now?

1st tech: describe it better

2nd tech: make the lasting period less since you will need a lot of reitsue to use it and put a limit on it to

305 Posts and am a Espada

so i get true form i believe

Description:

Sin turns into a Bat~like Hollow, His claw's is his Spear~Zanpakutou in minotaur size. He has wing's that can shield him from most attacks, He can't see anymore so he would have to use his sense's (hearing,feeling etc...) He is stronger in the moonlight. He is weakened at dawn and he is normal in the afternoon. His entire face is covered with his Arrancar mask thus explaining why he can't see anything. He weakens in the Sunlight because it burns his skin a bit (kinda like a vampire, but he wouldn't die unless he stood there for weeks). At night is because night = no sun, in the after noon its just to balance it out. In his True Form, he is white all over and he has blood lining (no i dont mean bloody red lining but blood lining). He could also use his wings to fly around, but he hardly does that since it is kinda hard to move them (heavy wings). He also gets a long (around 7 feet long and 70cm thick) spiky tail tipped with many types of poison's, if it is cut off it would simply regrow. He could use the tail for many purposes, such as if his wings are too heavy to block a attack he would move his tail in the way. He could also use it to grab things such as a Enemy's Zanpakutou. As for his main ability on his true form he can regenerate his wounds every 10 seconds which is 0.50%, which in a post i will notify how many seconds have passed.

eddited

wow can you not come up with your own moves

Tech 1: sounds alot like what the bount leader can do

Tech 2: sounds like senbosakura senkai

your true form sounds like ulquiorra's release

senbosakura senkai i have no clue what that is =P
as for bounto leader can do, yea it does seem like it except for the fact that i can throw them


I'm probably gonna change true form,

senbonsakura senkai is the thing with the purple sword, byakuya uses it

and yeah so cant the bount leader

i eddited the 7th Technique
btw is the 8th one ok?