Seseka
Vizard
Number of posts : 4
Age : 31
Location : jog...basketball...work
Humor : male
Registration date : 2009-02-18
Character
Character's Name:: Seseka
 |  Subject: Enzeru Tsubasa  Thu Feb 19, 2009 10:35 pm | |
| Name: Enzeru Tsubasa Manifestation:  Release Phrase: Engulf them, Enzeru Tsubasa Owner: Seseka Level: Shikai Family: Darkness Appearance: Sealed:  Shikai:  Its a little longer, Its a greatsword. Techniques: 2. Engulf them, Enzeru Tsubasa (I cut my sword in mid air creating a void that moves toward the enemy. If hit they can have parts ripped off of them because of the intense darkness and void) Uses 6 Destroy all life, Enzeru Tsubasa (I stab my sword into the ground and darkness spreads everywhere, I can also control someons shadow and I use it to choke or kill the enemy.) Uses 4 | |
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Sin
Alado's Fraccion
Ex~3rd Espada
Number of posts : 434
Location : In a box
Humor : Bloodthirsty
Registration date : 2009-02-03
Character
Character's Name:: Sin
| | Subject: Re: Enzeru Tsubasa Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:55 am | |
| okay first of all post a recharge and it says only that you have a 2nd technique but not a 1st and the manifest doesn't work. Also for the owner can you put in your last name =P | |
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Dante
10th Division Captain
Moderator
Number of posts : 246
Age : 31
Location : inside your skull, on a boat
Humor : your skull being crshed under my foot is my humor
Registration date : 2009-01-05
| | Subject: Re: Enzeru Tsubasa Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:56 pm | |
| Engulf them, Enzeru Tsubasa (I cut my sword in mid air creating a void that moves toward the enemy. If hit they can have parts ripped off of them because of the intense darkness and void) Uses 6
Explain the uses. I dont understnd what that means. and clear up the last sentence, i dont understand what you mean by "intense darkess and void"
Destroy all life, Enzeru Tsubasa (I stab my sword into the ground and darkness spreads everywhere, I can also control someons shadow and I use it to choke or kill the enemy.) Uses 4
Again with the uses. Define everywhere, 10 meters? 40 meters? What is it? Shadows cannot choke people, and explain "kill the enemy" | |
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Seseka
Vizard
Number of posts : 4
Age : 31
Location : jog...basketball...work
Humor : male
Registration date : 2009-02-18
Character
Character's Name:: Seseka
| | Subject: Re: Enzeru Tsubasa Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:40 pm | |
| The Engluf is basicly sending a black hole at the enemy.
Destroy life is based off of Shikmaru's Strangling thing. | |
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Vergil
Admin
Dark Vizard
Infinito
Number of posts : 692
Registration date : 2009-01-01
| | Subject: Re: Enzeru Tsubasa Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:42 pm | |
| change the first tech, since if you made a black hole then you would be sucked in it too
second tech: how would that work out | |
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Teketsa Kisuke
Vizard Leader
Number of posts : 554
Age : 31
Location : Crazzzyyy Town
Registration date : 2009-01-25
Character
Character's Name:: Teketsu Kisuke
| | Subject: Re: Enzeru Tsubasa Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:43 pm | |
| What he means is. The black hole thing is like a concentrated gravity thingy. The shadow thing is like Shikmaru after naruto. You take the shadows of a person and give them form and being. Causing them to be able to transform into a hand or a leg and attack the enemy. | |
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Vergil
Admin
Dark Vizard
Infinito
Number of posts : 692
Registration date : 2009-01-01
| | Subject: Re: Enzeru Tsubasa Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:45 pm | |
| the first tech he cannot use gravity and darkness
second tech how is a shadow going to do any damage to a person | |
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